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Together as One
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Once in our lifetime there comes an angel.
I saw one today, she's an inch away from me
Her enchanting eyes are like a sparkling diamond.
Her radiant smile will reside forever in my mind.

I asked her to wear this blindfold while we walk
I lead her into the hidden dark forest.
And when we got into the core of the place
I said, "Remove the scarf my beautiful mistress"

Suddenly tears run down her angelic orbs.
The whole place was full of candles and red roses.
And there right in front of her a piece of paper.
"My heart will always and forever belong to you"

I said, "Since you've left everything became cold"
I came closer to her.. "Now that I'm with you
My life has once again shined in this dark path."
You are my friend, my princess, my only one.

A thousand kisses can never compare
How I always want to be with you..
More than a thousand laughs
Wouldn't show how happy you make me.

I kneel down and reach for her soft, perfect hand..
Please give me another chance to love you again.
I reach for my pocket and produce a ring
With engraved words 'You're my only one'

She smiled, I've been waiting for this moment..
Her lips have touched mine, oh how sweet they are.
Suddenly I cough.. And red blood sprayed in the place.
I said.. Sorry I didn't tell you before..

It was my death wish to see your smile..
My time is limited.. I'm going to die..
She said, "I will never leave your side.."
Together we will depart this world.. Never to be apart..

Forever our hearts will beat together as one.



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tamsir rongpipi Wrote:
Crush
Stare at him,
Dream of him,
that's all I can do,

cannot reach,
cannot touch,
coward in me.
It refused.

will I just look & love
not even dare hint at my thoughts,
else I may lose a friend or worse,
rejection to hard to discount

frustration builds,
my mind ablaze love, desire,lust cannot be separated
the winds of time blow in my face
if it stops,so end my days

was it wrong to love?
if I have no courage
melt my legs & my chords,
just look him in the face

I remain alone
isolated,scared,
never to bear the fruits of love,
of the boy I never had

just reach out & take
my arms before they start to ache
nerves fail me,
& so does my grace

it is passonate round about
on which i bob up
and down I go
will i ever get him,
I shall never know

so I dream on and on
into the night
love not lost,but found
one day the courage will come,
and then,and then,
I shall rejoice



please write down your poems





Wow!!!!!What a great idea to post poems like that in this forum congrats!!!!


tamsir rongpipi Wrote:
i think no one out here is a poet.

LIFE

Life is an ocean
we keep going up and down,
on the waves of fate,
facing all that comes,

If we capsize and then fall,
we will join the vast ocean,
and then shall
become one with God


Wow!!!!!What a great idea to post poems like that in this forum congrats!!!!


emiliejudy Wrote:
Love is like a mountain;
it is hard to climb;
the few that reach the peak
know that the view is magneficient.


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shadow99 Wrote:
WAR MEANS death……,
WAR MEANS destruction……,
WAR MEANS fire……,
WAR MEANS bombing…..,
WAR MEANS sorrow…..
WAR MEANS turmoil…..,
WAR MEANS tears……,
WAR MEANS guns…..,
WAR MEANS blood…...,
WAR MEANS confusion….,
WAR MEANS explosions…..,
WAR MEANS mutilation……,
WAR MEANS sickness……,
WAR MEANS killing…..,
WAR MEANS occupation…..,
WAR MEANS loss……,
And lots more……,

But after one side…..,
Or the other side…..,
Has finally had enough….,
And lays down their arms
To surrender and give up…..,

WAR MEANS PEACE….! ! !


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tamsir rongpipi Wrote:
REGRET OF WAR

there in the twilight of peace,
I can sit and feel the breeze,
memories of life,
wash me down,

a silent tear,
run my cheek,
I bother not,
to clean its trail,

regret finally reach me,
that for the crime I did,
murdered a man with cold blood in me,

though i wear the uniform of war,
represent the country,mine,
who has the right to permit me,
to kill another man

isnt it better to lose
than spread such grief,
doesnt everyone,
want peace?

thats why i must
sit here and brood,
for a sin I committed,
without a crime

somewhere I imagine,
past o border far,
a mother cries,
for her lost star

she ques God
and cruses me
the pain I have caused
will never leave,

what answer to God,can I give?
I sold my humanity for our lives
or sold our lives for humanity?


Wow!!!!!What a great idea to post poems like that in this forum congrats!!!! so you mean its a great danger when we talk about war!!!!


shadow99 Wrote:
Dark Nights

Dying Romantic says:
I walk these streets all alone,
the sound of your voice still ringing on my phone.
You just couldn't leave our past behind,
why must I be the one that's always kind?
Your face haunts my nightmares,
and you always leave me something on the stairs.
I burn it with glee,
and yet you send more to pester me.
This heart can't take any more abuse,
so let me cut you loose.
This is goodbye...


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tamsir rongpipi Wrote:
GONE

live in my heart,
my special other,
for i cannot reach you,
where you have gone

as your last breath,
echos through the room,
I realise you have left me,
more in love than before

you have attained,
freedom from this life,
and have left me to suffer,
without thy touch

I now sit here beside you,
the representation of your soul,
I mourn more for me
and less for you

I shall move on,
on with my journey in life,
even thoug handicapped
my heart spilt

soon even i shall learn
the meaning of life,
dance with stars
and come to you

and then we shall be together,
one single entity,
no restriction on our love,
no restriction on our passions


Wow!!!!!What a great idea to post poems like that in this forum congrats!!!!


shadow99 Wrote:

Love

Words twist and tumble
Through my mind
But I can't grab the right word
Or the right line
So we sit
In silence
But it’s not uncomfortable
In fact I love it
You rest your head on my chest
As we lay here
Lovers entwined
Hearts tangled
You raise your head
And look into my eyes
And I see our love
Almost as if it’s a real force
I don’t ever want to lose this moment
You lay your head on my chest once again
And now I can feel your heartbeat
And my hearts skips
And I finally find the words I’m looking for
I love you


Wow!!!!!What a great idea to post poems like that in this forum congrats!!!!


Da Slasher Wrote:
I don't know what to say

I'm not a poemer

But thank ya


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tamir Wrote:
LOVE

Love is like magic
And it always will be.
For love still remains
Life's sweet mystery!!
Love works in ways
That are wondrous and strange
And there's nothing in life
That love cannot change!!
Love can transform
The most commonplace
Into beauty and splendor
And sweetness and grace.
Love is unselfish,
Understanding and kind,
For it sees with its heart
And not with its mind!!
Love is the answer
That everyone seeks...
Love is the language,
That every heart speaks.
Love can't be bought,
It is priceless and free,
Love, like pure magic,
Is life's sweet mystery!!


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This are all magnificent, fabulous and wonderful poems that show your great imaginations huh!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Uhh, your not allowed to double post/post one after the other in the same thread


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wahh, the poems are nice.

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He Loves me
He loves me and today that is enough.
He holds me and my worries melt away.
His touch lights a fire that only his kiss can quench.
He loves me.
This man, this lover, this friend that I adore.
So kind, so gentle, always making me crave for more.
He is my soul mate, my weakness, my heart's desire.
He loves me with all my faults and blemishes.
The quiet ever wanting, insecure me.
The woman I am he loves.
He is wonderful, beautiful and he loves me.
He loves me and today that is enough.


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tamsir rongpipi Wrote:
GONE

live in my heart,
my special other,
for i cannot reach you,
where you have gone

as your last breath,
echos through the room,
I realise you have left me,
more in love than before

you have attained,
freedom from this life,
and have left me to suffer,
without thy touch

I now sit here beside you,
the representation of your soul,
I mourn more for me
and less for you

I shall move on,
on with my journey in life,
even thoug handicapped
my heart spilt

soon even i shall learn
the meaning of life,
dance with stars
and come to you

and then we shall be together,
one single entity,
no restriction on our love,
no restriction on our passions


He’s Gone
He's gone.
My heart went with him, holding tight to his hand.
He smiled as he left me, eyes filled with memories I
wept.
A place I can not see, a love that was his and mine.
He's gone, I'm here.
He was my air, my sun shine, my laughter.
His hands so gentle, now cold and gray.
The soul that filled my life has left this world and
me behind.
I feel him smiling, waiting and hoping for me.
He's gone, I'm here but I'm aspiring to be there.
Each moment I miss him, his eyes, his laughter, the
way he loved me.
My memories have become a prison I can't escape.
He made the walls of this empty place feel like a home.
He poured himself into me with joy, and now all that's
left is me.
He's gone, I'm here but I'm aspiring to be there where
he is home.


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beautiful poem i'm speechless

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Dense

So sad & alone in a happy crowd
Lost & confused in a patterned life
Don't know what to do
Can't really tell how or what I feel

I really can't understand
How my life goes on
I wasn't even aware
The way it passes me by

Everything seems worthless
No one gives a little attention
And no one seems to care
Or even bothered to ask

Though why should it be important
If it doesn't make any difference
It doesn't matter anymore
I'm still lost in this wilderness.


There is only one way to happiness, and that is to cease worrying things which are beyond the power of our will.
-- Epictetus
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