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His Fate is in Your Hands!
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diablofdb Offline
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Post: #571
RE: His Fate is in Your Hands!
o.0 wow interesting story XD it's just hard to follow ince I missed the start I'm starting reading some part
07-05-2009 12:19 PM
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RE: His Fate is in Your Hands!
Yes your arm regenerates. It's like playdough lol, but what happened to you, think of how Piccolo of Dragon Ball Z loses his arm and regenerates it. It hurt for sure, but it's okay afterwards xD.

hehe my story is too predictable I think...

haha diablo! If you're ever bored, try reading the whole thing lol or at least glancing at them. There are a bunch of celebrities and cameo appearances in this! It's pretty fun and you can even join in on the fun and I might even put in your own character!



You get into the vehicle. The vehicle had the Wonder Rangers' insignia on it. It must be one of their vehicles... but where are the Wonder Rangers?

You try to start it up but it won't go...

"Crap..." you mutter.

"Krazoom!" Iya yelled in a whisper, "Look, they're fighting each other!"

You look outside the cockpit, and the 3-arm monster and the BYJ monster were indeed battling it out. BYJ was using his sword and the 3-arm monster was clashing it's own weapons with him.

As interesting as this fight might be, regardless of the winner, either of them could still destroy them afterwards. So you try to start the vehicle again. You close your eyes and concentrate... pick a number between 1 and 6. The number you give will determine if the vehicle starts or not.

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07-06-2009 03:29 AM
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Post: #573
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yes I would be interested in taking part of this it seems fun
07-06-2009 03:43 AM
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Post: #574
RE: His Fate is in Your Hands!
When Ron gave choices, diablo, the first to reply should choose so that the fic can move on... and yay! you'll be taking part! It means more character soon! lol

mmm... since you didn't choose a number, I'll choose...

I choose: 6

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07-06-2009 08:54 AM
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Post: #575
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ok so I have a number to choose too if I understand?
mhmm let's see I have a good feeling for the number 5
and I'll have my own character?
07-06-2009 09:30 AM
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The first to reply gets the chance to have his/her idea/choice be part of the fanfic... if s/he didn't choose, then the first to give a choice gets it... you know, like a first come first serve basis... so, since I already chose 6 then, Ron will continue the story based on what 6 means... sorry your 5 will have to wait...

As for having your own character, Ron already offered to create one for you, that is, "might" make you a character... he still doesn't know you so he'll probably have a go-see first... or maybe he'll make you Bob! Big Grin

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07-06-2009 02:18 PM
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LOL yes, Bob is only the best character in the story... Everyone likes to forget about him or tries to get him killed haha... Who wouldn't want to be that guy?! haha but really you'll get to play as yourself if you join this fic. Although I might give you a super power, or *something*, like I did with the others. This story is very much like a "Resident Evil" meets "Heroes" meets "Goosebumps: Choose your own adventure book" type of story hehe.

Right now, we're going trough Krazoom's point of view, so it's his story right now. I don't think I'll be creating another "lead" character since I think I have too much already, but hmmm maybe.... I've been thinking of something to freshen the story up a little... lately it's been "wander here, fight that. Wander there, run from that." and no real story really lol.

And yes, the first to give an answer to the story gets their input. Also sometimes you can even think out of the box and do whatever you feel like it, as long as it's not too crazy. So for example, if you didn't want to pick a number and instead wanted to opt to run instead, you can do that too! But anyways...

so... 4jpz said "6"... but I was looking for odd numbers actually... so...




The vehicle wouldn't start...

"Crap..." you say.

"Krazoom!" Iya yelled to you, "Bae Yong Joon is winning!"

BYJ had used it's incredible strength to cut off all of the 3-armed monster's arms. Then, as a finishing blow, BYJ stuck his sword through the other monster's chest.

"Krazoom..." Iya said in a slightly panicky voice, "We need to get this vehicle to start! Bae Yong Joon might come for us next-"

CRAAAAAASH!

BYJ had thrown his sword at the vehicle and pierced all the way through. Luckily, it didn't hit either of you.

"Iya, we have to run," you say, "This vehicle isn't going to start."

"Man, monster after monster! We never get a break!" said Iya, on her way out of the cockpit.

"Quick! I see a hallway!" you say, getting out as well.

You both run towards the hallway, and just before you get there, you and Iya crash into something invisible that stops you from moving forward and fall to the floor with a painful thud. You slightly see a glowing, pink aura around the whole opening.

"It must be some sort of forcefield..." said Iya, rubbing her forehead.

"Dang..."

Now Bae Yong Joon is walking towards the both of you. You get up and form a sword with your hand.

"We have to fight him."

Iya nodded, getting her bow ready and lighting her fingers with her lightning arrows.

But before any action was made, something from the hole in the sky came floating down and started shooting at BYJ. It was some sort of hover board type of craft, floating down and riding it were two of the Wonder Rangers, Sun Mi and Sohee, and Joanna. The three of them were holding laser pistols and firing at BYJ. He turned his attention at them and now they were in trouble...

Iya fired her arrows, as you rushed forward to save them. The trio ran towards you as they were chased by BYJ. You come face to face with BYJ and swing your sword. He counters by swinging his own at yours.

Your sword sliced in half. You scream in terrible pain, as part of your arm fell off again.

"Krazoom! No!!" cried Joanna, turning around as she joined up with Iya and the two Wonder Girls.

You were on your knees, and you struggle to get up but the pain was horrible. You can't seem to regenerate your arm at the moment either... You watch as BYJ stares you in the eyes and lifts up his sword to deal the finishing blow.

But Joanna, Iya, and the Wonder Girls wouldn't have it that way and fired all that they had to stop BYJ. His attention was distracted again and started shielding his face from the blasters and lightning arrows. You found your strength to get up and run from there.

Noticing that you were getting away, BYJ furiously went after you. But with nowhere to run to, all seems lost...

When a girl with a rocket launcher comes out and shoots at BYJ.

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BYJ was knocked back, and was clouded in smoke.

"Run!" said the girl. The forcefield was gone and you and the four other girls ran through the hallway.

You look behind you at the girl who was busy fighting BYJ. You're in a hallway with many doors. What do you do now? Wait? Keep running? Or try doors?

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07-06-2009 06:04 PM
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Post: #578
RE: His Fate is in Your Hands!
(07-06-2009 06:04 PM)Rondillo Wrote:  Although I might give you a super power, or *something*, like I did with the others.

I think I belong to the or *something* category! Sounds not cool! lol

Is that Makino?

All three! lol... you know, you run then try doors... but don't get inside just yet... you know, peep inside first coz it might be more awful if you barge in without a clue... so, in a way you also wait! Big Grin so all three! Big Grin

Did I just make their lives complicated?! Fun! Toungue

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07-06-2009 07:14 PM
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Post: #579
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nice story even tho im lost....cant remember anything from before. Cant wait for my part. Smile

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07-07-2009 03:34 AM
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lol and the fan fic continues! lol.

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07-07-2009 04:34 AM
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