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His Fate is in Your Hands!
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You knock twice on the door. At first you hear what seem to be faint whimpers, but disappeared quickly to sounds of a "Shhhh"ing sound. But before you can put your hand on the handle, the door flings open suddenly and Mr. Clown with the Pick-axe swings down his mighty weapon at you.



He misses yet again, but when you jumped away, you threw your flashlight up in the sky and it landed on your head... knocking you out.

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An unknown number of minutes pass by and you awaken to the Wonder Girl's song "Tell Me" and you see two of the Wonder Girls Yoo Bin and Sun Ye dancing along with the music. But they didn't look happy at all...



You were tied up heavily with duct tape against the wall and your mouth had been shut with tape as well. You see the three clowns enjoying the show. Until one of them, the first clown, noticed you were awake.

"He's awake you guys!" he said with a nasty grin, "How should we cut him up? Bottom first or top first?"

The two laugh eerily as they pick up their weapons.

And that's when a loud burst comes from the door and this music plays in the background. (click the link and let play in background as you read the rest: http://youtube.com/watch?v=4MjuEqaSWmk)
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GHOSTBUSTERS!

They aimed their weapons at the 3 clowns and large flashes of light swept the room. 4 magnificent beams were aimed at the three clowns and started shaking them violently. And they began to transform... transform into the other 3 Wonder Girls!! Ye Eun, So Hee, and Sun Mi eventually appeared and collapsed to the floor.

The Ghostbusters finished capturing the three ghosts into their machines.

"Whooo! That was easy!" said one of the Ghostbusters, holding up the steaming box.

Another went to free you and the others went to see if the Wonder Girls were okay.

Before you could ask for an explanation, the Ghostbuster had already decided to tell you.

"These were Ghosts that would hijack bodies and turn them into their own. However, it is not long before they use up all the energy inside it and must go find another host. Apparently these ghosts were only after certain body types. They were probably Asian and were only after other Asians," he said with a smile.

"Or racists," said another Ghostbuster.

And then the police came. Apparently, there were other people murdered and some were weird cases of bodies seemingly to have no injuries, yet have no life in them. They were probably the Clowns' old hosts... One of them even had a nametag... Nanny Ji.

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They took the three Wonder Girls, who have already started to regain consciousness, to the hospital to make sure they were completely all right. Sun Ye and Yoo Bin were being brought along with them.

But before they left, Yoo Bin said to you, "You're very brave, even though you knocked yourself out." And smiled.

You were kinda deaf at the time and all you heard was that you were "brave" and a "knock-out". Smile

A doctor came up to you then and checked your eyes. "Should you be taken to the hospital too?"

Should you go to the hospital? The Wonder Girls would be there, you haven't even gotten an autograph yet. But the concert... Didn't you come here for Wonder Girls? xD

There's another question to be solved though... why did you dream of the clowns before they attacked you. Maybe you should chase the Ghostbusters before they leave to ask some questions..




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The whole point of this is to see the Wonder Girls! Forget the questions.. Head to the hospital! And bring a paper and pen with ya..




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I will go off topic about this but WTF is this!? Its like more than a novel in here and doesn't interest me at ALL. I dunno why though.

I have read some pages but nothing is interesting me with this thread. First thing it about that guy, then it goes all off topic about other things. Is this like where you make up your own story and you let the other people give their opinion of the best solution or something? Or we are sticking to the same story?



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It's the same story, but at certain points of the story, you get to decide which direction the main character is heading or what door to take, etc. Kinda like those old Goosebump books! Ehem




So you decide that the weird dream you had was nothing and that you would rather go see the Wonder Girls at the hospital. Plus, Yoo Bin said you were a knock out Smile

"Yes, doctor, my head hurts..." you say to him.

"Okay then let's go. To the hospital."

(by the way, you just passed up the chance to see Rondillo, Fake_Innocent, and Vietshortee, who was there to see FAHRENHEIT, at the Peace Concert 0_0. Of course Bob doesn't care...)

You happen to travel in the same ambulance as the Wonder Girls. You still didn't have pen and paper, but you did have your cellphone still, so you can still take pictures! But it wasn't the moment to be doing this, since you all just survived a horror show.



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The hospital visit ended up splitting you and the Wonder Girls up. Celebrities and commoners get different attention anyways. And your visit ended being really short for you. But you still decide to wait for the Wonder Girls.

Maybe there's a place to use the Internet here now... or an Internet Cafe somewhere... although painful memories came back to you... eeehehe

But you decided to search for one... You need to tell EVERYONE about your experience on Amped Asia.

Luckily, there's an Internet Cafe across the street!

And you log in.

When you got on Amped Asia, there was one news article by Krazoom, which caught your attention.

Krazoom Wrote:
November 15, 2009... I know this isn't news about Asia, but something is going on here... there seems to be a quarantine of the whole city of Chicago. I don't know why, but it's really scary...


Hmm... you WONDER how you are gonna get home now... OH Wonder Girls! You might miss them! But Chicago... shouldn't you post a reply and wonder if everything is alright, or call somebody you know in Chicago?




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Hey hey hold it now! What are you doing to my Chi Town? I don't like this story anymore >: ( !! Why couldn't it happen in Cali? Hell yes you're gonna see what's going on there.. I'm not gonna let me die.. Send a reply! The Wonder Girls can wait..




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Apparently there were attacks being near the outskirts of the city. Possibly a riot, but there are also reports of cannibalistic behavior... But anyways... no plane can leave Chicago or any airport in the United States for that matter.


I just got an idea. An it involves using Krazoom's character now... Can I use you Krazoom? Smile sounds weird but hehe... if Krazoom can't be used, maybe I'll create a new character for this chapter. I feel I should end this chapter of Bob's soon...


"Now what," you say, "I can't go back home... and I don't have much money... Oh I got an idea!"

Rondillo, fake_Innocent, and Vietshortee are still here. Maybe I can stay with one of them. And the WONDER GIRLS! I'm sure if they listen to my story they'll understand! Plus they are grounded here in LA as well... Hmm but they're celebrities... Ah decisions decisions!




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Wahhh! Stranger and stranger!!! I thought the Peace concert was held on August 12, 2009 how come Krazoom sent a news dated November 15, 2009... You're not being consistent or there's a time warp!!!

Ask Krazoom a question about the strange city of Chicago...... err stay with Ron's house... lol... coz I think viet is staying with Joanna... boys will stay with the boys and girls will stay with the girls Toungue




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lol so traditional 4jpz xD.. I agree though.. Bob can stay with you..

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And yep you can use my character ^_^.. I'd like to see what I would do.. I hope I have matrix style ass kicking moves..... You better not kill me off!!

Jeez ron something so weird as this thread has kept me wanting more xD.. It's interesting seeing where this story is going..




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yeah it's interesting... When season 1 is done, Ron should send this to a publisher then Ron will have to share his royalties to us when the book gets published... then this will become a movie... and Ron's dream of appearing in a movie will come true Toungue Big Grin




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Hey but we were used in this story so that means he either has to get our permission to use our identities or hire us to star in it as well xD..




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