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Birth of Ahero.
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Birth of Ahero.

(Grammar needs work since I am basically winging it as I type)

Chapter One


In the middle of the night hours, a man ran through the streets of New York. His choice of clothing include a ripped jacket barely covering his beer and dirt covered t-shirt and pants that looked like shorts. His beard bounces as he turn right and left. In his hand is a watch of some kind. It is too dark to see what it really is. For now, he will be known as shaggy dude.

Behind the shaggy dude is a pair of hovering droids with search lights and scanners. Behind the droids are three individuals running along. Each of them is wearing a black suit and a navy blue tie. Almost like the Men in Black but the three men are Asian. In each of their right hand is a small handgun, which looks really high-tech and futuristic.

"Oh god! I can't shake them off! Ompf!" The shaggy dude fell, noticing a banana peel on the floor. "Oh slag!"

The man turn his head to see the three men looking down and aiming their guns at his head.

"I found this watch fair and square! You can't have it!" The dude hugged the watch as if it were a child. "Go away!"

The first of the black suited man put away his gun. "Look. The watch is ours. If you give it back nicely, we will let you go!"

The man, holding even more tightly at the watch, stared. "I think not!" He got up via break dancing flip and roundhouse kicked all three men. They flew back into some trash cans and the shaggy dude ran off.

"Get it. And the watch too!" The droids sped off in hot pursuit of the shaggy dude.

Shaggy dude ran faster and faster. He would take a glance behind now and then. The droids disappeared. The dude slowed down and hid behind a large dumpster. He sat down and huddled against the warm wall.

"If Grumm and his empire minions gets his hand on the Ahero Morpher, Earth will be in great peril. I must protect it with my life."

The shaggy man took a black garbage bag nearby and put it over him.

"Now it is time to sleep!"

Stay tune for Chapter Two of Birth of Ahero

Who is the shaggy dude? What is so important about the Ahero Morpher? And who are the three men chasing shaggy dude? Stay tune.


TO BE CONTINUED......


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08-25-2006 02:35 PM
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RE: Birth of Ahero.

haha kind of interesting, a bit short though.


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RE: Birth of Ahero.

A very unique and interesting story! Infact, it made me chuckle a few time Big Grin

Looking foward to the continuum.



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RE: Birth of Ahero.

Ah. I been busy with college but I might be able to have the next 4 chapters up by Monday.

Stay tune.


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RE: Birth of Ahero.

Yeah! get ready for the story. That's Fun.



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ouuuu, sounds like something from a preview of a movie where they get you all tense and want to know what happends next...your story is very detailed yet i'm waiting to see what happends next...no rush here, take your time to write it



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nice...iam wait the next chapter

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